The movement is wonderful and very natural! His right hand's curve seems a bit strange to me, but overall, I love the weight distribution and the overall end product- especially that whip to his feet and the follow through with the bounce to the coat ^^ Hrmm I think my problem with the arm is that the fist/wrist keep the same sort of angle like they're being held stiffly and then are at a different angle once they pass by with little hint to them begining to move befor hand- I figure it's meant to be a wipped sort of action but it was what stood out to me as awkward- it's a nitpicky thing, but in future cycles maybe something to think about?

Regardless, it's better than any of my walk cycles! XD my fellows end up with limps and I'm too lazy to refine them D: Totally looks like a pencil test straight out of X-men Evolution! ^_^

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cool , thanks dood , really appreachate the indepth comment ! the hands were a constant problem for me , GRR. Maybe next time i'll just pretend he was in a fight and hand them like..torn off.haha.
thx agian

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wow hun, thats fabulous! you did a great job

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i uploaded it for you , maybe one day i'll put some of my old animatiosn from last year up in scraps.

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You know, these clothes do not fancy you at all. It should be a dress or nothing. I happen to have no dress in my cabin. - Jack Sparrow

Heeheehee animation peeps gotta stick together XD

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A man's gotta do what a man's gotta do.
Don't plan the plan if you can't follow through.
All that matters is taking matters into your own hands.
So please give me a sec to catch my breath.

I really think you're on the right track! everything looks just as good as one could expect, so there's really nothing negative I can say. Keep up the good work! ^__^

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that'd be cool...shows your progress too!

DO IT!XD

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8V wow!

looks fun... i need to learn me some animation skillz...

U and capri are both going to algonquin ?

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